Chapter 11 - The First VisitorMy parents arrived on the third day.
They came straight from the airport, sunburned from a cruise they would never speak of fondly again. My mother entered my hospital room, saw my face, and made a sound I had not heard since childhood—the sound she made when something precious had been broken and she wanted to kill whoever broke it.
My father did not speak at all.
That was worse.
He walked to my bedside, kissed my forehead, then turned to Nora.
“You saved my daughter?”
Nora looked embarrassed.
“I answered a doorbell.”
My father took both her hands.
“No,” he said. “You answered a prayer.”
My mother cried when she saw Grace and Leo. My father stood at Leo’s incubator for nearly twenty minutes, one hand pressed flat against the glass, whispering baseball statistics because he said every boy should enter the world knowing his team had disappointed generations but remained beloved.
For the first time since the surgery, I slept.
Real sleep.
Not pain-drug drifting. Not panic-blackout. Sleep.
When I woke, my mother was in the chair beside me, knitting something yellow with hands that trembled only when she thought I wasn’t looking.
“Travis called us,” she said.
I stared at the ceiling.
“When?”
“An hour ago.”
“What did he say?”
“That he made a terrible mistake. That his mother confused the situation. That he loves you.”
I closed my eyes.
“And?”
My mother’s needles clicked once.
“I told him love does not leave blood on a floor.”
Tears slipped sideways into my hair.
“I should have left sooner.”
“No,” she said sharply.
I turned toward her.
She leaned forward.
“You do not get to carry their guilt for them. You hear me? Not one ounce.”
I nodded, but I did not fully believe it yet.
That afternoon, Travis sent flowers.
White roses.
Deborah had always said white roses looked “classier” than colorful arrangements.
I had once told Travis I hated white roses because they reminded me of apologies from men who expected forgiveness before changing anything.
He sent three dozen.
Nora intercepted them at the nurses’ station.
The card read:
Mara, please let me fix this. I need my family. —Travis
Nora brought the card but not the flowers.
“What did you do with them?” I asked.
“Gave them to the nurses’ lounge,” she said. “No sense wasting perfectly good guilt.”
Despite everything, I laughed.
Then I cried because laughing hurt.
That evening, Detective Alvarez returned with an update.
“Travis gave a statement.”
My father straightened.
“And?”
“He admitted leaving you. He claims he believed he had enough time.”
My mother’s face went icy.
“Enough time for what?”
Alvarez looked at me.
“That’s the question.”
He opened his notebook.
“He also says his mother told him you were exaggerating because she had spoken to someone who said first labor takes many hours.”
“Someone?” I asked.
“Yes. We’re trying to identify who.”
Nora’s expression changed.
“What is it?” I asked.
She did not answer right away.
Then she said, “Deborah called me two weeks ago.”
My blood chilled.
“What?”
“She asked casual questions. About twin births. Emergency signs. How long labor usually takes.”
The room went dead silent.
Nora swallowed.
“I thought she was anxious about becoming a grandmother.”
Detective Alvarez’s pen hovered over the page.
“What exactly did you tell her?”
Nora looked devastated.
“I told her twin labor could change quickly. I told her not to delay if anything felt wrong.”
My mother covered her mouth.
Alvarez closed his notebook slowly.
“So Deborah knew.”
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Nora’s eyes filled with fury.
“Yes,” she said. “She knew exactly enough to understand the danger.”
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